Creativity Thread

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[Daniel Hopkins]

Diamond Moonlight of liberation


Diamond moonlight of liberation wax eternal !
Free black seed and shed your kernel
Let auspicious spirits with grandiose might
Rain mountain like thunderbolts day and night
Till the Gales of all worlds stop the flow
Of the shore less sea of sufferings undertow

Egalitarian protectors and nourishers of all
Lead the misguided lest they fall
Manifest far reaching spiritual power among the masses
Teacher less wisdom teaches less classes
According to conventional norms provisionally teach
Your infinite adornments and un-speak able speech
Words are not meaning



EACH IS ALL ONE AND NOTHING IS ALONE



Understanding the lands, their various orders and ages
All points enter one point, so say the sages
Enter in the Nadir Emerge in the Zenith
Decay on your tooth is a crater Behemoth!
A quadruplex of creatures inside everyone

Each is all one and nothing is alone

Permeate echoes that pervades the Cosmos
Demolisher of nothing please piss on Momos
Including all other villains who are the mad hatter
this is my unskewed view of the nature of the matter

[The Tongue]

Equal Plan

Permeate echoes that pervades the Cosmos
Demolisher of nothing please piss on Momos
Including all other villains who are the mad hatter
this is my unskewed view of the nature of the matter



American Flag Floor Mat


My country is to me,
A Despotic misery

A class of life, a race of dead
A gluttonous glow from Gorgons head

A love affair a priest a prevaricator
A secret pact no foursquare adulterator

The righteous die and the wicked live on and on
To hide the key that sets us free from utter oblivion

That’s why I masturbate on the flag and use it for my mat
To tread and shred its sundry threads then give it to my cat

He pisses on his "MOMOS," which are a dumplings from Nepal
He masturbates upon his country’s flag
He’s worried cos he’s growing old while all the good die young
He’s afraid the priest, (His Lover) will see him as some hag
He commits adultery with the priest, that’s if he has a wife
A prevaricator.....he evades the truth
I don’t say he hates his country it’s he who makes that claim
Just read his poem, it’s there you’ll find the proof......The Tongue.

The God of blame and ridicule, who finds fault with all of us
The critic of petty details, by the Greeks is called "MOMUS."

[Daniel Hopkins]

Dear tongue,

I fully admit my many human flaws and if I had any pride perhaps your critique might be a little embarrassing.

I enjoyed your poems above because they seemed as they were from your heart!


Sound

When civility no longer exists,
And humanity lies in an unknown mist
The sound can still be heard!
When all those souls that where never loved
turn from putrid mud into a pure white Dove
The sound can still be heard!
The lord has praised the organ in the ear
To achieve penetration far and near!
This sound, not the word, but its meaning
is about a myriad sentient creatures that are dreaming





WORDS AND MEANINGS

Descriptions are not always what they seem to be
They may be both right and contradictory

A jellyfish has form, yet it is has none
People are the same, but they are not one

A seed is a start however it is not "the" beginning
The Earth is turning and we are not spinning

A word is not a meaning, but meaning is a word
A tongue can say sweet things and also smell like a turd!



Buddha-Diaper-Spank

A Smile free from delusion and confusion in the world.
Is like a Zillion rays of light!
That is why I fell down at the Buddha’s sight!
His body of expression and nuance
Where like the clouds from the moon parting away!
His Majestic deportment and wisdom uncontrived
Reminded me of the sun in the summer sky!
His placid brow was like an Elephant floating on a leaf!
I noticed the animals around with subdued claws and teeth!
An analogy to decipher for why I thanked him on that day
He changed my diaper and gently spanked me on my way!

{I have a feeling that the previous tongue will touch upon this diaper!-ha)


Things (Dharma) where revealed
from what was hidden;
When I undertook with zeal
The Masters bidding.
Life is a Ghost town, filled with wretched creatures
Life is an Infinite land with Infinite different features
Life is a prisoner facing execution
Life is the baby who is aborted and excluded
Life is all things that happen in just one blink
Life is Like the Author, with no provisions for the ink
Life is the reflection of the moon on the river
Life is like a promise that will never get delivered
Life is the past, present future all
looking at each other
Life was hiding my mistakes
and chaffing out my brothers
Life was murky and I was not feeling all so sure
Life was tiresome and difficult to endure
Life was the snake and now its just a rope
Life was the drug and I was just a dope
Life was the ship sinking and then I found a boat



Dedicated to Tongue

Aloof and slowly
Approaching the Eternal
You cannot make sense of deaths decay,
burning water drenched wood
is your only fuel along the way

[Daniel Hopkins]

tongue, to save you some time wanted to correct when I wrote "where" for "were" .

Slang


What need a wordsmith for correct speling?
Is letter or meaning in effect compelling?
Language based on conventional tradition
Is a mob that talks and we all listen
but,
In a swamp of passion slang may still spawn
When it is in fashion to simplify expression

[The Tongue]

Did I offend the man? Nooo! People without pride cannot be hurt
And if the sharp two edge-ed Tongue, has cut the one, not made of dirt
No harm is done. For spirits do not bleed, spirits do not cry?.....Like HELL!
I’ve felt the sting of whips made from words that cut but cannot kill
Evil spirits that flow from the mouths of evil men trapped in Satan’s darkest den
Look! The heavens tremble, the earth groans, as spirits from on high descend.

Harvest time will soon begin. The ripening fruit must soon be gathered to God’s store
Open now the gates of hell, the weeds that choke, must burn and be no more
People who are humble, people of love, people of all races, creeds and colours
Kindred Spirits of one family who are my mothers, my sisters and my brothers
In a new world, a world where darkness cannot penetrate the glorious light
Never more to know a broken heart or wounded spirit, nor stumble through the night
So now it is finished, now comes the time, to read the first letter on every line.

TO HE WHO FEELS OFFENDED. We all make mistakes, you used where for were, I just had to edit the title of this poem because I had spelt 'FEELS" as FELLS, in our mistakes we are brothers.

[Daniel Hopkins]

Tongue,

good point, agreed!

[The Tongue]

As you appear to either, not read too well or fail to comprehend that which you do read, I now repeat and high light the main point, just in case you missed it Daniel Hopkins.

D id I offend the man? Nooo! People without pride cannot be hurt
A nd if the sharp two edge-ed Tongue, has cut the one, not made of dirt
N o harm is done. For spirits do not bleed, spirits do not cry?.....Like HELL!
I ’ve felt the sting of whips made from words that cut but cannot kill
E vil spirits that flow from the mouths of evil men trapped in Satan’s darkest den
L ook! The heavens tremble, the earth groans, as spirits from on high descend.

H arvest time will soon begin. The ripening fruit must soon be gathered to God’s store
O pen now the gates of hell, the weeds that choke, must burn and be no more
P eople who are humble, people of love, people of all races, creeds and colours
K indred Spirits of one family who are my mothers, my sisters and my brothers
I n a new world, a world where darkness cannot penetrate the glorious light
N ever more to know a broken heart or wounded spirit, nor stumble through the night
S o now it is finished, now comes the time, to read the first letter on every line.

[Daniel Hopkins]

tongue, as there was no point to your poetry, I said good point to your words "in our mistakes we are brothers."

You wrote:

"I don’t say he hates his country it’s he who makes that claim
Just read his poem, it’s there you’ll find the proof......The Tongue"

I probably have serious issues with YOUR country and anyone who would have minor issues with my serious issues! Also, I dont use simple words like hate with such complex devils-but thanks again for putting words into my mouth in the spirit of Jesus-a-man!


Also, regarding your Daniel Hopkins poem-Im feeling it a little, I mean we got to get you a beat and put a little real soul in yoe ass, but such an imitation is possible, especially from the Christian mind.

And I object to your supposition that the prejudicial Christian mind can grasp your "people of all races, creeds, and colours", when Sir William Jones showed that, from India (Supara, or Ophir) some of our worlds greatest influences traveled with the Ethiopians up the Nile-you best believe dem white boys wasn't having it and I charge you with following them and aiding their cause! My monograph continually deals with how our general Christian tradition has treated other faiths and its degradation of those with "krshna" skin cannot be denied by any!'.

Jerome calumnied Melania (Maurya, of Shisunaga, Kalasoka, Mahapadma,a.k.a. Vidudabha), cuius nomen nigredinis testatur perfidiae tenebras (“whose black name testifies to the darkness of her perfidy�);



The earliest cause of dissention among the primitive Brahmas is said to have arisen from the difference in the color of their skin. When two descendants of an illustrious Brahman became converts to Buddhism, Gotama enquired if their change of profession had excited the displeasure of the other Brahmans; and in reply they said it was alleged by their kinsmen, that the Brahmans are "the sons of Brahma, sprung from his mouth, pure and fair, while the other castes and sects are sprung from his feet, black and impure." This statement supports the supposition that the Brahmans at first confined themselves to some region not far from the place whence the first dispersion of mankind commenced, by which the fairness of their complexion was preserved; whilst the other tribes of the Hindus went on towards the south, spreading themselves throughout the entire extent of the peninsula, and penetrating even to Ceylon; by which their complexions would be gradually rendered darker, from their residence under a vertical sun. It has been asserted by those who have had the opportunity of forming a correct opinion upon the subject, that the Brahmans are even now, at least in the north of India, a fairer race than the other tribes; hence the proverb, "Never trust a black Brahman, nor a white Pariah [those who dyed clothes, Gospel of Thomas cop. Samghabhedavastu and many Buddh. sources; Buddha came to dilute the races much much earlier than Thomas' one line]." The Buddhist legends agree with revelation in teaching that all men were originally of one race; but with this truth they have mixed up error that the aborigines of mankind were many. There is also an agreement with the Scriptures, in the statement that men were originally pure, and that they fell from eating a product of the earth {true manna} “Manuel of Buddhism, 77



The Buddhist legends agree with revelation in teaching that all men were originally of one race; but with this truth they have mixed up error that the aborigines of mankind were many. There is also an agreement with the Scriptures, in the statement that men were originally pure, and that they fell from eating a product of the earth “Manuel of Buddhism, 77

Wow, the Christian scholar, which can be a very brilliant mind, yet bound by deep prejudices, there is much to be learned from “people� like these, I wait for the tongue to put me at ease!.



"say to you, it was not Moses who gave the bread from heaven; MY FATHER gives you the true bread from heaven". Buddha was also said to give "true rice",which, like "true bread", really means "true sustenance"


From the earliest of Buddhism we have the seeming dichotomy between being repulsed by the body and being attracted to Buddha’s beauty as a child to a mother. This is dealt with in the Heart, and The Perfection of Wisdom sutras. As Jesus says, “Man cannot live on bread alone.� The Buddha said the same but included four different kinds of food (manaHsamcetanahara)and one of his famous similes about “The World� being as a couple who are lost in the desert and decide that the only way they can reach a town is by eating their “only son.�According to Christians, it was for a similar reason that Christ was “killed,� if such a word can be used in the temporary sense.
“There are, O monks, four nutriments for the sustenance of beings born, and for the support of beings seeking birth.� What are the four? Edible food, coarse and fine; secondly, sense-impression; thirdly, volitional thought; fourthly, consciousness.�

[The Tongue]

Yea! Right he said as he scratched his head and scratched his backside too
I don't care what buddha said and I dont care much for you.
Your scholars wrote their books you see, when Jesus gained eternity
They copied much of what he said and put it all in buddha's head.

[The Tongue]

[Daniel Hopkins wrote].......The Buddhist "LEGENDS" agree with revelation in teaching that all men were originally of one race; but with this truth they have mixed up error that the aborigines of mankind were many. There is also an agreement with the Scriptures, in the statement that men were originally pure, and that they fell from eating a product of the earth “Manuel of Buddhism, 77

This section of the forum is not for debates, but for creativity such as poems, etc.

And that man—u--al was written, “WHEN?�------ After Jesus died and rose again,
After John had written his final book, and you say that manual’s a "LEGEND."'LOOK,’
A legend can’t be verified, we don't know if the author of that legend lied
And the words of buddha that he wrote, were simply another bible quote.